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This my proposition/draft to rewrite the chapter 1 from stephane de Labrusse
This my proposition/draft to rewrite the chapter 1 from stephane de Labrusse
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Will finish proofing and amalgamate your edits etc to the Chapter..thanks - [[User:Trex|Trex]] ([[User talk:Trex|talk]])
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Will finish proofing and amalgamate your edits etc to the Chapter..thanks - [[User:Trex|Trex]] ([[User talk:Trex|talk]]) ok[[User:Stephdl|Stephdl]] ([[User talk:Stephdl|talk]]) 15:33, 29 January 2013 (MST)
need your help, a pick up few lines below in the text...that i think we need to discuss [[User:Stephdl|Stephdl]] ([[User talk:Stephdl|talk]])
need your help, a pick up few lines below in the text...that i think we need to discuss [[User:Stephdl|Stephdl]] ([[User talk:Stephdl|talk]])